基础写作-地点介绍good.ppt

说明文—地点简介;; Place;1. “某物位于……” e.g. 国家游泳中心位于奥林匹克公园内。 The National Aquatics Center lies / stands / is located /is situated in the Olympic Park.;. “东，南，西，北”的表达 sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处 1) Guangdong is ___ the south of China. 2) Beijing is ___ the north of Guangdong. 3) Guangdong is ___ the east of Guangxi.;2. “面积”的表达 ①The area of+某地+is+……square meters ②某地+covers/takes up an area of +……square meters ? with an area of... e.g. 国家游泳中心的建筑面积有79，532m2。 The area of the National Aquatics Center is 79，532 square meters. =The National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79，532 square meters.; 1. Tiananmen Square, with / covering an area of…, is the largest square in the world. 2. Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size. ; ;2.介绍人口（Population）:;;Location + area + population;3. “长，宽，高”的表达 ① sp. is +数字+量词+in length/width/height ② sp. is+数字+量词+long/wide/high e.g. 国家游泳中心的高度是31米，宽是177米，长是177米。 The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters in height, 177 meters in width and 177 meters in length. =The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters high, 177 meters wide and 177 meters long.; History: ;History: over 4,000 years Symbol: Five Goats Culture: Lingnan Culture;climate:; ;Places of interest (名胜) ;Feisha Beach;Places of interest (名胜) 3)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 4)The city is well-known / famous for its…/as… 5) … is a must-see for tourists, as… 6) ...enjoy the reputation of... 7)serve as the capital of... 8)with...river winding its way through the city... ;seafood; ;Useful Expressions;;;; 假设你是广州亚运会一名志愿者，请你用5个句子写一篇英语短文，向外宾介绍广州。;Step 1: 审题; Step2: 理清要点整理成5个句子; Step3: 翻译句子;◆ Exchange your composition with your deskmate and help each other to improve your writing. 在评改时，应注意以下几个方面： 1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇 。 2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定的5项内容，在表达完整的5项内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分。 3、在连贯性方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。; Step3 句子翻译; Step3