雅思大作文4分范文评析.docxVIP

智课网IELTS备考资料雅思大作文4分范文评析 摘要： 下面小马小编为大家介绍一下的雅思大作文4分范文评析相关内容，本章的内容丰富，题目经典，非常有利于雅思考试成绩的提高，大家在阅读的过程中要仔细总结经验，善于总结，只有这样在雅思考试当中，才能取得好成绩。 今天小编为大家带来的主要是关于 雅思 大作文中的经典范文，其中还附有评析，希望大家能对今天的文章能对大家有所帮助。 Topic:Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree of disagree? sample : According to universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Therefore, this essay will show some reasons of argument for and argument against. Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin with universities should accept equal numbrs of male and female students in every subject because it will be balance of idea while studying. In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman. These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. In addition, nowadays, the most societies become to accept ability of both in any way. Secondly, I will discuss about one reason of arguments against that is some subjects not suitable for each other. for example, some subjects of sports such as weight putting. It is not suitable for female because there are different of body between male and female. In conclusion, I agree with universities should accept equal numbers of male an female students in every subject. Moreover, it depend on what the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose by themselves because I believe that if the students like to study their subjects, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with this topic. 4分的原因： 首先，该同学在语法上的缺陷是致命的，多数句子都不符合英语句子结构的要求，如：These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Lead to已经是谓语动词了，后面再出现will happen就是错误的，要知道后一个动词需要采取去动词性质处理：This will lead to new ideas from different perspectives happening 其实这句话也很罗嗦，完全可以改成：This will lead to a wider variety of ideas. 另外一句： Another reason is it display that have