专四写作技巧之五命题作文和常见错误.ppt

Writing of TEM-4 常见语言失误类型 词的属性 句子的结构 时态、语态、语气、情态 句子连接 平衡结构 (1) Some one thinks that the opportunity is very few for him because he has never meet the chance. (2) But other one thinks there are chances here and there, then everyone can meet opportunity. (3) I resist the second opinion. (4) There are some opportunities, the important thing is that if we could catch the chance when we meet it. (5) In our lives we have a lot of choice that need us take our heart to. (6) For example, when I was a little boy, my health was very bad. (7) One day a teacher advise me to join the basketball team with my friends. (8) My health become well. (9) So I think there are opportunities for everyone. 命题作文写作模式 比较选择类 意义、重要性、危害性说明类 观点论证类 现象解释类 提出建议、解决问题类 命题作文写作模式 A.比较选择类： A1. 比较两种事物的优缺点并标明倾向 A2. 比较两种做法的利弊并标明倾向 A3. 对一事物或做法的利弊说明 比较两种事物的优缺点并标明倾向 Television as a Better Source of Entertainment A Balanced Diet: A Better Way to Stay Healthy Borrowing Books Outweighs Buying Books 结构模式 A1,B1; A2, B2 语言模式 … Between the two: A and B, I hold that A is better… My belief that A is better than B is based on the following two reasons. The first reason is that A can … . While B can only… . The second reason is that A can … . But B can only … . For the reasons mentioned above, we can easily draw the conclusion that A outweighs B as an important C. 比较两种做法的利弊并标明倾向 Where to Live: In a City or in the Country? Where to Eat: In a Restaurant or at Home? Whether to Further Study or to Find a Job Soon after Graduation? 结构模式 引言：事实引出A, B, 说明两者有利有弊。 正文： 赞成A的理由概括加拓展；赞成B的理由概括加拓展；A\B各有弊端。 结论 语言模式 As to the question: where should we A or B, different people have different opinions. Actually, both A and B have their own advantages and disadvantages. Many people appreciate the convenience of A. … But B is also attractive. … Both A and B, however, have their own disadvantages. … As far as I am concerned, I like A/B. So, given the chance, I would prefer A/B to B/A. Exercise Directions: Every July is the time for g