Composition概要.ppt

班会上大家对于国产动画和国外动画进行了热烈的讨论。请根据下面的表格内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。100字左右。 国产动画 优点：教育儿童帮助、尊重别人，做一个诚实、勇敢的人；儿童可以从动画中学到知识； 缺点：过于理想化；缺乏想象力；情节简单 国外动画 优点：以现实为基础，成人也喜欢；儿童能够从中学会处理现实中必须面对的问题； 缺点：有的涉及暴力；有的被视为文化侵略（invasion）。 话题如何展开？---自然衔接 We had a heated discussion about _______ ___________________________________ After the discussion we get some conclusions about them. (杨凯义) 话题如何展开？---看法和态度 We do have different opinions on this matter. 看法和态度 attitude 态度 opinion观点 hold 持有（某观点） view观点 as for 关于 differ (different )不同 insist on 坚持 personally 个人（来看） Some are in favor of ~~. However, others don’t hold the same point of view. (许迪虎) I personally think (in my personal opinion) ~ As far as I’m concerned, ~ 优点 缺点 The shortcoming of foreign cartoons is that some are related to violence, it is not good for children. (斯悦临) 优点 缺点 缺点 亮点句型： 对比、转折 对比、转折 亮点句型： 结论 亮点句型： Cartoon: Domestic or External?（蒋金津） We had a heated discussion about domestic cartoons and external cartoons. They both have benefits and shortcomings. Domestic cartoons can teach children to help and respect others. They tell children to be honest and brave. But these cartoons are too ideal and also lack imagination. The story are too easy. How about external cartoons? It is based on real life and adults also like them. Children can know how to solve the problems which they are faced with in reality. They also have disadvantages. Some of the external cartoons refer to violence and others are regarded as cultural invasion. In a word, we should accept the good ones and reject the bad ones. 经典错误分析 ~~cartoon can help children to be a honest and brave people, educating them to help and respect others. (方凯杰) But it can teach children to help and respect each other, becoming a honest and brave people. (周玉静) And tell children become honest and brave people is very important to us. (徐烨) 奇形怪状错误分析 badly off imagination (杨海贝) I think cartoons