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　　08考研英语强化写作核心要点之评分标准及样卷 Directions:　　Among all the ankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her obolic meaning of the picture belople, and 　　3) give your suggestion as to the best ply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, eaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, atter hoany different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions. 　　As an example of the poember hos of natural disasters every year. Although their ines are still looney or goods -- to help their needy felloselves. 　　In my opinion, the best ore unfortunate than atter ily members or plete strangers. In this ake the ore brightly the lamp of love shines. 　　样卷的评分和评语 　　Sample 1, Sample 2 　　给分：(17—20分) 　　评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。 　　Sample 3, Sample 4 　　给分：(13—16分) 　　评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚，文字连贯；句式变化较多；结构与用词有少量一般性错误；长度符合要求。 　　Sample 5, Sample 6 　　给分：(9—12分) 　　评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚；但结构与用词错误较多，有少数是严重错误；长度符合要求。 　　Sample 7, Sample 8 　　给分：(5—8分) 　　评语：内容切题，包括题中所列要点；语句尚可理解，但结构与用词错误多；有些是严重错误；长度基本符合要求。 　　Sample 9, Sample 10 　　给分：(1—4分) 　　评语：与题意勉强有关，但条理不清，不成篇章；语句错误多且严重；词不达意。 　　(注：文章长度低于180个词扣1分，低于170个词扣2分，依次类推。) 　　1、Among all the ankind, love is probably the noblest. It is of the utmost importance to the human beings, Everybody not only needs love, but also should give love. 　　As is described in the picture, love is a lamp ore light than ordinary people. Maye even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe jus 123456下一页 ［教育资源网］edu..，。t a thread of light eone is starving to death, just a little food and you may save his life. Or all sum of money from you may support her to finish her schooling and change her life, you have given love p in a dark place ost needed. 　　So to sum up, others and eone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, dont hesitate to give your love to him. I believe then the relationship betonious and our society ost tal