写摘要-激动人心的赛马-An Exciting Race-An Exciting Race L. G. Alexander.docVIP

写摘要:激动人心的赛马-An Exciting Race-An Exciting Race L. G. Alexander 激动人心的赛马 【内容提示】 下面是一篇关于赛马的记叙文。请你在阅读后按照文章下面的“指示”写摘要。 An Exiting Rae Frt-t hrses had taen up their psitin n the starting line fr the greatest rae f the seasn The urse as extreel diffiult and fe hrses ere expeted t finish All ees ere n the favurites, llege B and Seet Seventeen Bth hrses had n a great an raes in the past and the had equal hanes f inning n Thugh the hrses gt ff t a gd start, it as nt lng befre ver half f the ere ut f the rae As as expeted, llege B and Seet Seventeen had gt ell in frnt ith the reaining hrses gruped tgether se a behind n a sharp rner, three f the hrses leading the grup fell, thring the riders behind int great nfusin (混乱) As the rae prgressed, the tra beae full f hrses ithut riders Tards the end, there ere nl three hrses left: llege B and Seet Seventeen ere still leading ith an unnn hrse, T Thu, a ver lng a behind The rd as ver disappinted hen n the last up in the rae the riders f bth favurite hrses failed t eep the saddle (马鞍) Everne rared (呼喊) ith delight hen llege B ntinued b hiself and“n”the rae----ithut his rider! T Thu n t his tie and the rd heered and applauded (鼓掌欢呼) as he rssed the finishing line ithut a rival (竞争者,对手) in sight INSTRUTINS（指示）： 用不超过80个词的篇幅依照下面的要点和衔接词语描述从比赛开始到结束所发生的事情。 PINTS（要点） NNETINS（衔接词语） 【作文示范】 An Exiting Rae L G Alexander As sn as the rae began, the favurites, llege B and Seet Seventeen, ent ahead n a dangerus bend a fe riders ent ver and st f the hrses flling fell ut f the rae Tards the end,there ere nl three left: the favurites and an unnn hrse, T Thub Hever, the riders f bth favurites fell t, thugh llege B ntinued b hiself and“n” Sine T Thub as n n his n, he beae the real inner (80 rds) (选自LG Alexander, A First B in prehensin, Preis and psitin) 【写法指要】 将一篇较长的文章写成摘要时，须先把原文要点列成简略的提纲，再把它们之间的逻辑关系用适当的衔接词语沟通，最后按提纲写出句子，用衔接词语连接，这样就可以组成一篇连贯流畅的短文了。这也是练习做笔记的一种方法。