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电脑时代-The Computer 【要求】 在一次主题为“电脑时代”的学校征文活动中，你计划以“The puter”为题写一篇文章参加评选，你的辅导老师帮助你制订了一个写作纲要，如下： 计算机正广泛被用于各行各业。 在过去的五十年中，计算机得到了迅猛的发展。 计算机最终还是由人来设计和控制。 【范文】 The puter The puter is idel used in all phases f siet In industr, business, eduatin, ediine, nearl all als f life, puters have ade their appearane, prviding great speed and aura fr ur r puters have been used in the he, ffies, labratries and researh institutins, funtining as the st effiient and versatile instruents fr alulating, srting, filing, rerding and distributing puters are indispensable t dern ivilizatin ithut puters, ur life and ur siet ill undubtedl suffer a big regressin During the past five deades the puter has been rapidl advaned Ever sine the puter ae int being, it has experiened the develpent f several generatins, hih are based respetivel n vauu tube, transistr and integrated iruit Earl puters ere f great size, and had n ath fr the latest eletrni puters in speed and aura The Latter is apable f pressing the st pliated infratin and reahing slutin t prbles in a fratin f tie At present, effrts are being ade nt nl t bring the hardare t perfetin, but als t iprve the qualit f the sftare 作文的内容千变万化，这就要求我们丰富自己的知识，特别是各行业的最新动态。只有这样，才能自如地处理各种题材和内容。 puters ust be instruted and prgraed b peple In spite f the rearable sill f the puter, en an never bee its slave puters are nt reative The r arding t en＇s instrutins S the develpent f puters and their use ill depend upn the ingenuit f en Althugh there are ties hen puters see t perate lie a ehanial “brain”,their ahieveents are nt parable t hat the inds f en are able t d 【评语】 全文按照题目所给主题共分三段，以说明为主，第三段具有议论性质。本文层次清楚，表达准确，句与句之间联系紧密。该文题材涉及当今热门话题，许多与电脑有关的词汇和表达法对同学们有参考价值。