你必须知道的托福写作23个易扣分点.docx

智课网TOEFL备考资料你必须知道的托福写作23个易扣分点 摘要: 要想写一片优秀的英语作文，一定要在作文的内容和语言方面做好整体的布局，任何一方面的偏差都会影响到作文的质量。其实，从大数据来看，多数考生都是在文章的细节失分，但是往往自 要想写一片优秀的英语作文，一定要在作文的内容和语言方面做好整体的布局，任何一方面的偏差都会影响到作文的质量。其实，从大数据来看，多数考生都是在文章的细节失分，但是往往自己还不知道为什么失分。为了让考生们写出更加华丽的英语文章，这里智课为考生们总结了23个易扣分点，希望能对考生们的考试有所帮助。 托福备考干货分享、周一至周五每晚八点半口语微课 名师点评、扇贝小组，欢迎积极参与互动和活动（qq群：128090743） 例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当运用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时分，应当运用词性一样或同一类型的短语。例：Many companies began using computers mouth.She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不共同。We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.遣词过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。在正式的写作中不要运用缩写方式(cant，dont，its，well，theyve等等)，而应当运用单词的完好方式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。Since I want to go to a good school，therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的首要主语和首要动词前运用连词。Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school.句子没有首要主语或首要动词，由于本来它应是一个从句。这是一个十分多见的过错，修正的办法是将两个句子连接起来。Get太不正式，意思也过于迷糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个愈加详细的单词，如become，receive，find，achieve等等。I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不准确，或许让人听起来觉得也许不准确(假如确实是准确的，应当解说为什么这样，由于读者不认为是准确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;咱们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为稳妥起见，应当运用many或most.非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.虽然看起来象个单词，本来不是，最少不是个英文单词。运用这个单词的另一种方式。I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US，I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class， my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表明这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种状况多见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因此不能在它们前面增加介词。There are many reasons to buy a car， preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很一般大多数人都现已晓得到了，因此就没有必要再说出来。I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to beco