考研英语作文模板随笔.pdf

英语作文模板随笔 今天来谈谈英语作文的模板吧。挺有用的，尤其是对于英语作 文有困难的同学来说就很有帮助，至少对于我这种考研过来说的感 71 觉是这样的。说说我考研英语的分数吧。英语总分 分 （英语作文 19分，阅读A30分，阅读B10分，翻译 分，完型 分。6 6 先看看我的那一篇考研的英语作文，之后在来说说英语作文的 模板。 原文： Filialty duty(Filialduty or Filial piety起先我用的关键词 都出错，致命的打击！）doseexertsuchaprofoundeffectonour life that itrevolutionizes theway of people’s thinking and living.As is subtly shown above,on the right picture stand a heart-kindmother andher littledaughter,holdingtheirhands together.Onthecontrary,intherightpicturewalkhand inhand a young lady and her weaken mother.What a harmonious picture it is! The thought provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in the contemporary society that there is the positive influence of Filialty duty(又犯错啦） .It’s widely acknowledged that Filialty duty is a kind of lubricant for interpersonal relationships among the family members.Nothing,except Filialty duty ,can play a more indispensable role in the cultivation of love .According to the recent report by CAASS--Chinese Academy of Social Science .the past decades has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the Filialty duty from 21% to 78%.That is to say,Filialty duty win the appreciation of public. Just as what Benjamin Franking once said”love and duty conquer all things.”It is high time that we put emphasis on theFilialty duty,andcultivatethecitizens’awarenessthat Filialty duty is essential to us.Only in this way can our societybe more harmonious,our economybe more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising perspective. 如今在回顾一下这一篇作文，既是幸运又是惋惜。幸运的是，作 文还是给了我19分（当时自己估分13分左右），惋惜的是，Filialty duty 这一个关键词，竟然出错。藉此我做出两个假设：第一：如果 我这篇作文遇上一个比较严格的改卷老师，那这一篇的文章的分数 肯定不会高，因为关键词出错，一下子模板的影子全部显现歘来。 第二，如果我这一篇文章的关键词没有写错的话，那么分数可能还 会再好一点。下面我对这篇作文进行一些修改，看看效果会不会好 一些。 修改后： Filial duty dose exert such a profound effec