2015高考英语短文改错及书面表达练习（五）及答案.docVIP

2015高考英语短文改错及书面表达练习（5）及答案 短文改错 　　Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei 　　Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous1. _______ 　　mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather2. _______ 　　was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______ 　　the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______ 　　climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______ 　　and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______ 　　since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7. _______ 　　Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at8. _______ 　　the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______ 　　the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.10. ______ 　　答案及解析 　　1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。 　　2. 此行无错。 　　3. noon 后加 when 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。 　　4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。 　　5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。 　　6. picture 改为 pictures。 　　7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。 　　8. 删去 down。 　　9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。 　　10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。 短文改错 　　The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher1. _______ 　　talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 2. _______ 　　wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would 3. _______ 　　win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt 4. _______ 　　so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many 5. _______ 　　people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English 6. _______ 　　teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at 7. _______ 　　me. I remembered her words and calm down. 8. _______ 　　I did a good job and won the first prize. 　　Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.9. _______ 　　Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 10. ______ 　　答案及解析 　　1. teacher 前加 my。根据下行 She sai