2009年中考英语复习课件 学生作文讲评.pptVIP

* 学生作文分析： 好段落的三个标准： 段落的统一性：围绕一个中心 段落的完整性：有主题句，有发展句。发展句均要围绕着主体展开。写出的文章才会显得内容丰富。 段落的连贯性：形连，使用过渡词过渡句；意连，内容上的连贯。 优秀作文赏析 作文题目：目前所有的学校都在开展各种各样的体育活动。你们每天是如何开展体育活动的？通过参与这样的活动你有何感受或变化？又有何想法？ 提示词语： all the schools, have all kinds of, sport activities, take exercise, play football, go running, become healthier 提示：本文写作应分为三层： 开篇点题，引入话题； 重点应放在 “你们每天是如何开展体育活动的” 谈谈自己 建议：本文采用三段式比较好。即：开头段，中间段，结尾段。采用一段式容易写偏题。 Example -1 As we all know, many schools are carrying out the plan for students to do more exercise. And now, all the schools have all kinds of sport activities for students. As for our school, things are even better. We have various kinds of sports activities after school every day, such as basketball, football, running and so on. Hundreds of students come to the field, some enjoy going running, and others love playing football. And basketball lovers crowded the basketball field. Sometimes there are so many students that you see nothing but students exercising on the playground! Besides, the teachers are busy, too. They are not far away from the field to ensure that there are no accidents, you know, safety first! As for me, I’m a sports fan and I think it’s necessary for students to do some exercise every day. In this way, we can not only pass the P.E. exams, but also keep healthy! Thanks to the sports activities, I have become healthier than before. All in all, there’s nothing better than doing sports every day! Example -2 Do you have enough time for sports activities every day? Now, it’s not a big problem, for all the schools encourage students to take exercise at school. Talking about sport activities every day, it’s really colorful. Every morning, we have to go running in order to get better grades in P.E. At first, it seems difficult for most of us. But now we are used to running for such a long time, and sometimes we enjoy it. And when we have P.E classes, running is also an important part of it. After running, the teacher somet