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十年上海中考英语作文2011年上海中考英语作文题: Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of _________”. 以“我是~的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子。提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作家庭，班级，社区的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。Use the following points as a reference. Are you glad to be a member of ……? What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member? 例文+点评： 2010年上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself 　　1、What kind of person are you? 　　2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples) 　　3、Why are you proud of yourself?　　要求：至少60字 　　范文：I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know, The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me:“ impossible is nothing, ”“you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself ,though I didn’t get the good mark, I knew ,I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself! 满分作文+点评： 2009年上海中考英语作文题:I want to do something for my school以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 学生习作I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean.But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple? 点评： 此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。 全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。 例文： My school is in the centre of the city and the air aroun