雅思大作文政府类范文解密,想要得高分就不容错过-智课教育出国考试精选.pdfVIP

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思大作文政府类范文解密,想要得高分就不容错过-智 课教育出国考试 雅思大作文分类型来讲，大致涵盖了政府类，法律类，教育类等 八大类型话题，同一类话题的题目虽然不尽相同，但都有一些相似之处 。今天我们就一同来探寻一下雅思大作文政府类范文解密吧。 首先，我们先一起来回顾一下雅思大作文的评分标准，一起来看一 下如何对症下药才能让我们顺利地取得大作文高分。 和小作文相比，大作文的评分标准大致相同，分为了Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resources, Grammar Range and Accuracy. 其中，在后面的三项中，即Coherence and Cohesion , Lexical Resources, Grammar Range and Accuracy 中， 评分项目都和小作文是一致的，在这里小编就不在赘述了。但是在task response中，和小作文的task achievement 有了一些不同。 在小作文中，task achievement 这一项评分标准，考官做出了如下解释： Summarize the general features/trends (总结归纳数据的走势和主要特点) Select important information (筛选重要信息) Compare and contrast data(对比数据) 也就是说，要完成小作文的TA，必须要有趋势概括 ，信息筛选和数 据对比的内容。 那么在大作文中，TR这一项，考官又给出了如下解释： Task response: Whether all parts of the task are addressed Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported. 也就是说，和小作文中的数据筛选，趋势概括和数据对比不同，要 完成大作文的TR一定要完成题目要求 ，并且要给出清晰的扣题的观点， 并进行论证。所以大作文的论证一定要充分并且有效。 那我们还是按照考官给出的评分标准，来一起探究一下下面这篇范 文的高分之路。 The government should pay for people’s health care and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Health care and education are basic human rights and needs. Some people think that the government should pay for citizen’s health care and education. I partly agree with this view. There are three main reasons why the government should pay for citizen’s medical and educational cost. Firstly, a large proportion of government revenue comes from the taxes paid by citizens. The government should reward taxpayers with health care and education. Secondly, international competition in economic and technological fields is fierce today. The educational and health levels of citizens are important factors influencing the competitiveness of a country’s workforce. By providing citizens with education and health care, the government helps to promote economic and technological developm