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智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 从雅思写作评分标准角度分析作文-智课教育出国考试 本文从雅思写作评分标准角度分析例文，考生可以多多参考学习， 从中你会了解到如何应用写作评分标准，以便取得考官的青睐。话不多 说，一起来了解一下。 让雅思考生最头疼的一件事是，不管自己听了多少课读了多少本书 ，雅思写作提高就像蜗牛攀墙一样慢。这对于基础较好的学生尤其如此 。很多考生反映，到了一个瓶颈以后，似乎很难再往上提高。为什么会 出现这种情况?这是因为写作是很难自查的，即使平时自己练了很多， 还是不知道自己的错误在哪里。 四大评分标准本是雅思官方设来评判考生文章的手段 ，即是对方的 力，虽然来势汹汹 ，但只要我们只要把评分标准当做制胜关键 ，运用 每一项评分标准来检查自己习作，进而得到提高与进步 ，借力打力 ，便 可在大作文上取得完胜。 四大评分标准分别是:对写作任务的回应情况;连贯与衔接;词汇资源 语法的多样性和准确性。毋庸置疑考生的文章在每一方面都要做到尽善 尽美才有可能拿高分。出于这个原因，雅思写作指导书都会从这次个方 面入手 ，教学生如何达到标准。诚然 ，这些方法的教授对考生来说是有 必要的，但雅思写作的难处在于，掌握方法和运用方法是完全不同 的两回事。 基于上述原因，本文详细解读如何用四大评分标准去衡量和修改一 篇考生习作。下表是各项评分标准的自查项目 ，考生平时练习写作后可 运用此表进行 自查，进而完善与提高，做到借力打力。 下文是考生的一片习作，希望考生看完修改过程 ，今后自己也能用 相同方法修改 自己的文章。 题目： Electronic dictionaries are increasingly popular among students, especially those majoring in a second language or taking foreign language courses. In your opinion, do the advantages of electronic dictionaries outweigh the disadvantages, or vice versa? 文章： As the rapid(迅速的) development of science and technology, we have seen the appearance (出现) of lots of new products(产品). They have benefited us in more than one way. Because most of them are advanced(高级的), though they have their disadvantages, but their advantages still outweigh the disadvantages. The advantages of electronic dictionaries are many. First, they are very light, but they have more than one million words. A paper dictionary with so many words would be very large and heavy. Electronic dictionaries are also easier to use than paper dictionaries. Electronic dictionaries enable users to find a word in a few seconds by typing in(输入) the word. And they offer a long list of features(特点、功能) that made them better than paper dictionaries, common features consist a calendar, calculator, alarm clock and memos. The price of electronic dictionaries is no longer a problem. Nowadays, because the number of electronic dictionaries is increasing quickly