专四写作技巧之三主题拓展.ppt

Writing of TEM-4 Writing of Paragraphs Writing of Paragraphs 主题的拓展方法 主题的拓展方法 1.对比比较法 Instructions: You have been asked by the Students’ Union to write a passage entitled The Main Difference between My College Life and My Middle School Life as a part of an introduction program for new students coming in September. College life is quite different from middle school life. We, for example, have greater academic pressure, and we have more chance to meet learned scholars. Among various differences, I enjoy the “freedom” of college life most. I prefer college life to middle school life because I am free in the college. Firstly, … secondly, … Therefore, by comparison, I love the freedom of college life, which makes me feel like an adult. To the newcomers, I would suggest that we should make the best use of the “freedom” provided by the colleges to fully develop ourselves. 主题的拓展方法 2. 举例法 Sample 1 I have a neighbor, a 20-year-old girl. She is very beautiful, with well-proportioned figure and bright eyes. But unfortunately, you cannot say that she is attractive, because you are always surprised at her harsh voice and quarrels with other people over minor matters. So, we cannot judge a person according to his or her appearance. Case Study 1. 事例要具有典型性。 Sample 1-1 It is obviously true that we can not judge a person by his appearance. Li Zhaoxing, the former diplomacy minister, is not as handsome as Zhou, Enlai, and not as tall and sturdy as Zhu Rongji. But when he unyieldingly declares the China’s stance on the issue of “embassy attack”, when he strongly warns Japanese government of Taiwan affairs, and when we witness his great efforts and diplomacy wits in promoting China’s entrance of WTO, we can’t help being attracted by his special charming and admitting that a person can not be judged by his or her appearance. Sample 2 . My view that keeping a good mood is important lies in two important reasons. The first reason is keeping a good mood can keep people in high