托福高分写作：切忌不可犯的7大类语言错误.docxVIP

托福高分写?作：切忌不可犯?的7大类语?言错误　　托福考试的?作文一直让?不少考生十?分挠头。从确定主题?、理清思路，到划好层次?、遣词造句，环环相扣缺?一不可，因此作文永?远不是一项?小工程!文都国际小?编称，托福高分写?作：切忌不可犯?的7大类语?言错误。一起来了解?一下吧。　　虽说ETS?在评判托福?作文时采用?的是综合评?分的方式，即以作文的?整体水平判?分，而不纠结于?小细节。但有些同学?往往会在语?言方面疏漏?多多，问题明显到?影响了考官?整体评断的?程度，那即便你的?思路和论证?属于一流，最多也只能?得个二流分?数，岂不可惜!　　下面，文都国际老?师就来谈一?谈同学们在?托福写作中?最容易犯的?语言错误。大家可以对?号入座，看看自己是?不是也犯过?类似的错误?呢?　　1. 用词不当　　原：The absen?ce of group?work is a disas?ter for teena?gers in moder?n socie?ty。　　改：The absen?ce of teamw?ork is a disas?ter for teena?gers in moder?n socie?ty。　　评：group?work是?“分组”或者“小组集体任?务”的意思。这位同学原?本想说te?amwor?k“团队合作”，却用了一个?看起来很像?，但实际完全?不同的词，表达出来的?意思就风马?牛不相及了?。　　原：You will be dange?rous if you keep movin?g witho?ut a clear? view of the whole? pictu?re。　　改：You will be in dange?r if you keep movin?g witho?ut a clear? view of the whole? pictu?re。　　评：dange?rous表?示所修饰的?对象是“带来危险的?，有危险性的?”，而be in dange?r才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是?威胁呢?　　原：First?ly, the job, provi?ding the oppor?tunit?y for stude?nts to utili?ze what they learn?ed in class?, might? effec?t their? furth?er devel?opmen?t。　　改：First?ly, the job, provi?ding the oppor?tunit?y for stude?nts to utili?ze what they learn?ed in class?, might? affec?t their? furth?er devel?opmen?t。　　评：模样长得像?，意思可不同?了。这里想用动?词affe?ct表示“影响”，却误写为名?词effe?ct“效果”，一字千里啊?!　　2. 搭配错误　　原：Nowad?ays, peopl?e are crazy? pursu?ing to be excel?lent。　　改：Nowad?ays, peopl?e are crazy? about? excel?lence?。　　评：这位同学显?然记错了b?e crazy? about? sth. 这个用法，写出来的句?子自然会出?问题啦。　　原：Besid?es, publi?c speec?h can effec?tivel?y incre?ase your commu?nicat?ion skill?s, which? facil?itate? your sales?man caree?r。　　改：Besid?es, publi?c speec?h can effec?tivel?y impro?ve your commu?nicat?ion skill?s, which? facil?itate? your sales?man caree?r。　　评：此处是一个?明显的动宾?搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是im?prove? the skill?s，而不是in?creas?e the skill?s。　　3.词性错位　　原：I will forge?t my sad and press?ure from the work and the study?。　　改：I will forge?t my sadne?ss and press?ure from work and study?。　　评：sad是形?容词，而这里明显?需要一个名?词，应该是sa?dness?。　　原：Altho?ugh makin?g money? is a prior?it