浙江省宁波市2016高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（5）.docVIP

短文改错精炼（5） 短文改错 　　My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. 　　He did not want share things with other people. For 1._______ 　　example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._______ 　　in a secret place where I couldn’ t find it. Then he 3. _______ 　　ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 4. _______ 　　He said he is busy. That is, a game of 5. _______ 　　tennis making him very busy. He did not care 6. _______ 　　if something he did made people angry. For 7. _______ 　　instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _______ 　　loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 9. _______ 　　he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10.______ 　　with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his 　　classmates with their lessons. 　　答案及解析 　　1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。 　　2. them 改为 it。依据上下文， 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数， 后边的代词显然用 it， 而不是 them。 　　3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句， 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语， 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。 　　4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个， 而 others 指另一些。 　　5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。 　　6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语， 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。 　　7. 此行无错。 　　8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。 　　9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词， 此处修饰名词 music， 应用形容词。 　　10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。 It was a foggy day. The fog was such thick that it was impossible to see far. People were trying to find their way but was lost in the fog. Mr. Smith had important meeting but no one could take him there. He had to walk there but found himself lost. Suddenly a stranger told to him that he will take him there. Mr. Smith thanked him but they started to walk there. The fog was getting thick, but the stranger had no difficulty in find the way. Mr. Smith couldn’t understand why, so he asked her, “How do you find the way in the fog?” “It is no troubles to me,” said the stranger, “I am blind.” 【参考答案】6. It was a foggy day. The fog was such thick that it was impossible to see far. People were so trying to f