【飞渡绝密资料】雅思写作高分句子要求 .ppt

雅思写作评分标准 TR: Task Response 回答问题 CC: Coherence and Cohesion 连贯性及一致性 LR: Lexical Resource 词汇量 GR: Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法范围及准确性 雅思写作高分句子的要求 句子：语篇的基本组成单位 句子结构： 简单句 复杂句： 并列句、复合句、并列复合句 简单句： 只包含一个主谓结构的句子。 Jane and George are good friends. The Olympic Games can promote friendship and boost the economy of the host country. The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable. 简单句 五种基本句型：无论多么复杂的英语句子都不能离开的五种基本句型。 主语 + 谓语 I work hard. 主语 + 系动词 +表语 I am smart. 谓 语 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 I love you. 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 宾语 My parents gave me a gift. 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 补语 I consider him a hero. 主语 + 谓语 Crimes fall significantly. 犯罪大幅度下降。 Recent figures of juvenile crime are increasing. 最近青少年犯罪的数量在上升。 Without guns, both suicide rate and homicide rate will go down. 没有枪，自杀率和他杀率都会下降。 主语 + 系动词 +表语 Resisting a criminal with a gun is the safest thing to do. 用枪来反抗罪犯是最安全的做法。 The penalties for criminals should be severe. 对罪犯的惩罚应该严厉。 主语 + 谓语 +宾语 Media violence can affect children’s health. 媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。 Gambling and alcohol abuse cause crimes and destruction. 赌博和酗酒导致犯罪和毁灭。 主语 + 谓语 +间接宾语 + 直接宾语 My parents bought me a gift on my birthday. 我的父母在我生日那天给我买了礼物。 Community services offer wrongdoers an opportunity to correct their misconduct. 社区服务给做坏事的人一个改过自新的机会。 主语 + 谓语 +宾语 + 补语 We consider greed a source of evils. 我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。 Parents should encourage their kids to take part in more rewarding activities. 父母应该鼓励孩子参加更多有益的活动。 句子成分 主语、谓语、宾语、表语、定语、状语、补语、同位语 主语 Media violence can affect children’s health. 媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。 Gambling causes crimes and destruction. 赌博导致犯罪和毁灭。 To telecommute usually means working at home. 远程上班通常意味着在家工作。 We consider greed a source of evils. 我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。 Two million were turned away by American officials. 有200万人被美国官员拒绝入境。 That a nation should protect its cultural heritage is very essential. 国家保护文化遗产是至关重要的。 It is very essential that a nation should protect its cultural heritage. It is generally accepted that the Ch