活动感想类基础写作解题指导.docx

活动感想类基础写作解题指导　　一、重点诠释?　　1.活动感想类作文主要分成两种：“目的”型和“主题”型。?　　2.“目的”型一般前两句总体介绍活动，三四句介绍活动的具体内容，最后一句说明意义/感受；“主题”型则第一句总体介绍活动，二三四句介绍活动的具体内容，最后一句说明意义/感受。?　　二、具体布局（括号里数字代表在基础写作里的句子序号）?　　1.“目的”型?　　目的、活动名称、组织者、（地点）时间（1）+ 参与者（2）+ 内容（3、4）+ 意义/感受（5）?　　参与者、活动名称（组织者）、地点、时间（1）+ 目的（2）+ 内容（3、4）+ 意义/感受（5）?　　2.“主题”型?　　时间、活动名称、主题、参与者、地点（1）+ 内容（2、3、4）+ 意义/感受（5）?　　时间、参与者、活动名称、地点、主题（1）+ 内容（2、3、4）+ 意义/感受（5）?　　温馨提示：?　　如果“主题”型类“内容前”的信息比较多，可以仿用“目的”型的第二种布局：?　　参与者、活动名称、地点、时间（1）+ 主题（2）+ 内容（3、4）+ 意义/感受（5）?　　三、技巧点拨?　　1. 熟记“活动内容前的英文模板”。?　　活动感想类作文在介绍具体活动内容前的信息比较多（如目的、主题、组织者、参与者、地点、时间等），而且“目的”型和“主题”型的文章布局还各不相同，所以笔者建议考生不要死记具体布局，而是借助核心词背诵四个“活动内容前的英文模板”（见下面），这样以后遇到活动感想类的文章就可以依葫芦画瓢，写出漂亮的地道的开头。?　　“目的”型“活动内容前的英文模板”?　　In order to support Guangzhou to hold the 2010 Asian Games and protect our environment，an activity was organized by the Youth League and the Students’ Union of our school during the week from January 3rd to January 8th. All the students in the senior grades took an active part in it.?　　More than 1500 students in Senior Three in our school attended the grown-up ceremony on the playground at 3∶00 p.m. on May 4th， 2011. The aim/ purpose of the ceremony is to build up the awareness of students’responsibility.?　　“主题”型“活动内容前的英文模板”?　　Last Wednesday afternoon，an activity on the theme of “how to become a popular student”was held for the students of Senior Three in the school library.?　　At 3∶00 this afternoon，the teachers and students in Senior Three as well as our parents attended the grown-up ceremony held in the school hall，whose theme is “Growth and Responsibility”.?　　2. 合理组织“活动内容”要点。?　　活动感想类作文不可避免要介绍一些活动内容， 考生需适时借助一些句式或连接词（如下文划线部分）将活动内容要点合理连贯地连接在一起。?　　例1：?　　过程：1.唱一首感谢父母的歌，拥抱父母；?　　2.宣誓：做合格公民，奉献社会，服务国家。?　　Students sang a song to express their thanks to their parents first，and then hugged them in the ceremony. Besides， they swore that they would become qualified citizens and devote themselves to society and serve the country.?　　例2：?　　Some students cleaned the playground，watered the young trees and flowers，a