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^ | You have to believe, there is a way. The ancients said: the kingdom of heaven is trying to enter. Only when the reluctant step by step to go to it s time, must be managed to get one step down, only have struggled to achieve it. -- Guo Ge Tech 科技类作文；科技发展。。outline FOR： Convenientefficient 方便、高效 Enrich lifestyle 丰富生活 Environmentlly friendly（副词修饰形容词） 绿色环保 AGAINST： Physically harmful/detrimental 危害健康 Negative impact on the youth 危害青少年 Insecurity of information 信息不安全 开头方法一： Background Con troversy (2 different/opposite ideas) As/Being a controversial issue，。。。。。作为有争议的问题。。。。 Now days， the issue on。。。is highly debatable， and ideas vary from person to person。不同的人有不同的观点。（不要用different people 。。。。） Some would claim 。。。。，while some others may suggest。。。一些人认为。。另一些人认为。。 Some would claim。。。，while the idea。。。is still held by some others。Idea倒装，句子更好看。不能用some。。the other。。这样只有两种可能性，太绝对。。 末段（总结） All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum up When all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that … (主要用来凑字数)一切全都在/结束/总之/一般/总结F当所有上述因素都考虑进去，可以得出一个结论是... 1、不要再用 more and more了；该词组被评为中国恶俗词组榜第一！！老师说。。可以用a growing number of.. 2、inevitable ?不可避免的，必然(发生)的3、should/would/could/may/might；为什么要用这个5个词？首先，语气比较委婉，不会很肯定，显的谦虚；其次，可以不考虑动词的形式；所以这五个词被称为最贱的词。。 4、physically beneficial身体健康；副词+形容词的表达方式，比较好看，接下来也会有举例； 5worldwide/globly/internationally famous 举世闻名 ***赞成某个观点。。 As for me，I side with the fomer/latter 中立观点。。 As far as I am concerned， I believe both views have their own merits and con coexitlike a double-edged sword 双刃剑can be neither absolutely perfect nor purely harmful 既不能绝对完美的，也不纯粹是有害的 5个常用单词的替代 F Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / suppose F Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive F Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative F Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro F Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con / cost few 0-1 几乎没有 A few 一些，不多 5 Severa