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第 2 课时　巧用“高级衔接词”，让文章胜人一筹1.[例句]　就我个人而言，我并不赞成。Personally, I am not infavorof it.2.[例句]　坦白地说，我不同意他们的看法。Frankly speaking, I dont quite agreewith them.3.[例句]　就我的意见而言，我们学生应当平衡我们的身体锻炼和学习。至于我[例句]　至于我，我坚定地认为旅游者的数量应得到限制。AafarasIamconcerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies.as for meAsforme, Im firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited.4.[例句]　我上学迟到了。更糟糕的是，我还把课本忘在家里了。I went to school late. Tomakethingsworse, I left my textbook at home.5.[例句]　而且，价格也相当公道。除……之外[例句]　为了学好它，除去英语课之外，我积极参加英语角和其他课外活动，这使我受益匪浅。此外，而且[例句]　①此外我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。②除去这些传统的活动之外，我们还有更多的选择，例如旅游或走亲访友。Whatsmore, the price is fairly reasonable.apart/aside fromIn order to learn it well, apartfrom English class, I took an active part in English corner and other extra-curricular activities, which benefit me a lot.in addition (to)①Inaddition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.②Inadditionto these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.6.[例句]　我们所听到的一切表明现在的形势正在变得越来越严重。总之，我们正面临一场危机。一句话，总之，简言之[例句]　他工作不够快，出的错误太多，不肯听别人的劝告。一句话，他不能胜任这个职位。总而言之[例句]　总而言之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。总之[例句]　总之，成功来自于努力。Everything we have heard indicates that the situation is getting more and more serious. Inshort, we are facing a crisis.in a wordHe does not work fast enough, he makes too many mistakes, and he never listens to others advice. Inaword, he is not qualified for the position.　in conclusionInconclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.to sum upTosumup, success results from hard work.7.[例句]　说实在地，我不太满意。Honestlyspeaking, Im not satisfied with it.8.[例句]　以汽车为例，汽车不仅污染城市空气，而且使城市拥挤不堪。Lets take cars forexample. They not only pollute the air in cities, but also make cities crowded.9.[例句]　就我而言，我喜欢一个人工作。一方面，我不喜欢受严格的规章制度约束；另一方面，我一个人工作时效率最高。首先……；第二……；最后……[例句]　我对解决这个问题的建议如下：首先，迫在眉睫的是建立自然保护区；其次，有些濒临灭绝的珍稀野生动物应该收捕、人工喂养并繁殖；最后，对于捕猎珍稀野生动物的人必须严惩。首先……；而且……；此外……；最后但同样重要的是……[例句]　首先，如果我们记笔记的话，我们在课堂注意力会更