专四写作辅导和写作中常见错误.doc

专四写作辅导 写作要求及评分标准 （一）测试要求 要求根据所出的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲)写一篇200词左右的短文。能做到内容切题、完整、条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。考试时间35分钟。 写便条： 要求根据提示写大约50--60词的通知、便条、请贴等。要求格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。 （二）题型： 本部分为主观试题，分两节：SectionA和SectionB。 Section A：作文(Composition) 本节是作文，题目主要属于记叙文、说明文或议论文的范围。 Section B：写便条(Note-writing)本节是写便条。 测试目的：按照教学大纲的要求测试学生在基础阶段末期用英语书面表达思想的能力。 （三）评分标准 作文评分标准 本题满分为15分。 阅卷标准共分五等：15分、14-12分、11-9分、8-6分及5-3分。 15分——切题表达思想清楚，通顺；基本上无语言错误。 14-12分——切题表达思想清楚，连贯，有少量语错误。 11-9分——基本切题。思想，文字连贯；语言错误。 8-6分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。错误。 5-3分——条理不清，语言句子错误，Truly yours,// Yours truly,// Yours sincerely,// Sincerely yours,// Yours, 内容 3 涵盖invited + declining+ explaining 少1点扣1分，最多3项内容扣3分 语言 4 语法、词法正确 严重语法、词法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误2个扣1分，最多扣4分 语言得体性 1 总分在8分以上考虑加此分 总字数 50-60字（包括三部分格式） 少于40或多于80字扣1分 日期、称呼、结尾全左对齐也可：如： April 22,2007 Dear Jimmy, I have… Sincerely yours, Sally （四） 样卷分析 题目要求 Section A Composition Nowadays, the Internet has become part of people’s life, and millions of young people have made friends online. Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is it Wise to Make Friends Online? You are to write in three parts. In the first part of your article you should clearly present your view. In the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. (14 Pts) Is it Wise to Make Friends Online? With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern people’s life, making friends on line enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online. Firstly, too much attention to on