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Study Plus Resources for Postcards Resource 1.1aSelf-portrait with bandaged ear by Vincent van Gogh 1889 The man is indoors. He is wearing a coat and a hat with black fur on the front. The side of his face has a bandage on it. He is thinking back to an accident he just had. He is probably in shock. He is staring out of the picture like a madman. His face is pale. He has lost a lot of blood. He will probably collapse in a minute. Resource 1.1bWhat do you notice about the words at the start of every sentence? The man is indoors. He is wearing a coat and a hat with black fur on the front. The side of his face has a bandage on it. He is thinking back to an accident he just had. He is probably in shock. He is staring out of the picture like a madman. His face is pale. He has lost a lot of blood. He will probably collapse in a minute. Resource 1.2Targets for this unit of work: Vary my sentences in length and structure Use a wider range of connectives to show the links between my ideas Use commas correctly in long sentences Resource 2.2aTo vary my sentences I can start with: Resource 2.2bTo vary my sentences I can start with: Resource 2.2cTo vary my sentences I can start with: Resource 3.2Changing sentences The boy got into the car because it was raining. The girl walked out of the door while her mother was talking. Resource 3.3aWind surfers Resource 3.3bWind surfers Although the sun beat down, the sea was the colour of slate. Just the two of us were there, working the wind and the waves between the horizon and the shore, while the white foam boiled from the water under our speeding surfers. The wind was crazy. I was thinking that I must be crazy too, but it sure felt good, flying off the wave crests and into the grey-blue sky. Resource 4.1 Image courtesy of: www.freeimages.co.uk  Resource 5.4aWe use commas: Resource 5.4bWe use commas: Resource 5.4cWe use commas: Change the main verb Change the connective Start with an adverb Add a subordinate cla