2018高考英语 写作过渡课-高中课件精选.ppt

Yesterday I went to the friendship store.I was doing some shopping when I happened to see that a foreigner who spoke English was trying to buy some clothes.He tried what he could to make himself understood. But the shop assistant couldnt catch him. Seeing this, I went up to them and translated what the foreign guest said into Chinese for them. They said thanks to me. I think the shop assistant should know foreign language or how they could in such a big store without knowing any foreign language. * 书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则 语言第一位（语言高级） 内容第二位（要点齐全） 结构第三位（文章分段） 一、高级词汇和句式 二、修辞手法 三、有效的连词 四、名人名言或谚语 语言第一位（语言高级） 漂亮、地道 * 词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装 1、词组优先原则 2、地道原则。 3、避免重复原则 　4、后、高、长原则— 后学到、较高级、较长词汇。 四项原则 * 　　 　 1、词组优先原则 ［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown. ［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 　2、地道原则 ［原文］Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of knowledge. * 　4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇 hard very pay attention to happy more and more 3、避免重复原则 ［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 替换词 diligently rather extremely attach importance to; focus on delighted enjoyable the increasing number of * Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever →smart →wise →bright →intelligent * 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. 3.computers are of great importance in our life. * EX、运用高级词汇： 1.As a result, the plan failed. (一般) 2. She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般) 3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(一般) The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级) She went to Austria with the purpose of studying music. (高级) A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck /hit me(高级) * At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow(高级) She has trouble in pronouncing the word. (高级) 1. When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般) 2. She can’t