雅思写作7.0课程讲义.doc

7A版优质实用文档 PAGE PAGE 114 7A版优质实用文档 20GG年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义 主讲：刘巍巍 第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览 雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上 第一节的内容： 雅思写作的整体介绍 高分写作的要求 解决问题的方案 课程的总览 雅思写作的整体介绍GeneralIntroduction 听力、阅读考试之后 60分钟Task1andTask2 A类和G类的区别： task2议论文 task1A：图表作文G：书信 评分：以Task2为主 二：高分写作的要求 评分标准： VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构) Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证，论点和论据) CommunicativeQuality(交流质量) VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构) 避免使用过于低级的单词 Theproblembecomes worsebythepoor effects we made. Theproblemwas compounded duetotheineffective measures we had taken. Theyclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyanincorrectargument. Theclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyalameargument. PeoplefaceviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday. Peoplearebombarded byviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday. Thekindofgrowthmayleadtoverybad results. Thekindofgrowthmayleadto dire consequences. consequence: far-reaching（深远的）,profound（深刻的）,adverse（不利的）,catastrophic（灾难的）,damaging（破坏性的）,devastating（破坏性的）,dire（可怕的）,disastrous（灾难的）,fatal（致命的）,tragic（悲惨的）,severe（严重的）, 避免过分重复同一样的单词 Mothers enjoy the same right forcareeradvancementasfathersdo. Mothersarejust as entitled tocareeradvancementasfathers. Mothersareempowered to careeradvancementasfathers. 尽可能展示多变的句型 定语从句： Chinaisthelargestdevelopingcountryandisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth.Asaresult,inthestreetsofmajorcitiesinChina,therearethousandsofvehiclesofallkinds. Asthelargestdevelopingcountry,Chinaisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth,the evidence of which canbeseeninallmajorcitieswhose streets are teeming withthousandsofvehiclesofallkinds. 倒装句： Youngpeoplearesoimpulsiveandeasilyinfluencedthattheyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia. Impulsiveandeasilyinfluencedasyoungpeopleare,theyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia. 伴随状语： ItiscommonnowforkidstospendsiGandahalfdaysinschooleachweekbecausetheyhavetositthroughoneeGtraclassafteranother. ItiscommonforkidstospendsiGandahalfdaysinschooleachweek,sittingthroughoneeGtraclassafteranother