高考英语二轮专题复习名师制作优质课件：专题5 书面表达 第1讲 .pptVIP

返回导航 第一编　专题五　书面表达 大二轮复习·英语 第一编 专题五　书面表达 第1讲　满分作文的3大技巧 1 即时巩固 2 素能强化 高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠，为作文添彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点： 1．不“人云亦云”原则 写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如 ①attract→appeal to吸引 (2017·北京卷满分作文)It’s certain that the amazing scenery along the river will appeal to you. 河沿岸美丽的风景肯定会吸引你。 技巧1　词汇高级，“语”众不同 ②be active in→get actively involved in积极参与 (2017·天津卷满分作文)I will get actively involved in the volunteer work for the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin. 我将积极参与即将在天津举行的第13届全运会。 ③be busy with→be absorbed/engaged in忙于 (2017·天津卷满分作文)With the college entrance examination drawing near，I’m engaged in/absorbed in preparing for it. 随着高考的临近，我正忙于准备考试。 ④chance→opportunity机会 (2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)I wish you could take advantage of this opportunity to learn Chinese traditional culture further. 我希望你能利用这次机会进一步学习中国传统文化。 ⑤do well in→have a good command of做得好 (陕西卷满分作文)I have such a good command of English that I’m elected as assistant to my English teacher. 我精通英语被选为英语老师的课代表。 ⑥help→lend a helping hand帮助 (2016·全国卷I满分作文)I wonder if you could lend me a hand to polish my application. 我想知道你是否能帮我润色我的申请信。 2．短语优先原则 短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，因此考生宜利用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。如 ①besides→in addition/what’s more另外 (2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)In addition，there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. 另外，著名艺术家会现场表演如何剪纸。 ②consider→take... into consideration/account考虑 (2016·全国卷I满分作文)I would really appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration. 如果您考虑我的请求我将不胜感激。 ③many→a large number of许多 (2016·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)I remembered you showed me a large number of photos on the theme the last time you visited our school. 我记得你上次来我们学校时给我看了许多关于这个主题的照片。 ④remember→keep/bear in mind记住 (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)What you should keep in mind is that you have to apply for membership before the deadline. 记住在截止日期前申请会员资格。 ⑤understand→have a better understanding of理解 (2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Only through the activity can you have a better understanding of the Chinese traditional culture. 只有通过这个活动你才能理解这个节日。 ⑥very→more than非常 (2017·北京卷)I’m more