08语言干涩表达错误（会计类）改后稿.docVIP

PERSONAL STATEMENT by Li Qiang 该文原稿语言干涩，且很多地方表达错误，或不合作者本意。试看第一段剖析。 A senior student at the business school headed by Chinas tough Prime Minister, I will graduate next year with a diploma to be conferred by the Quebec Association of Certified General Accountants in Canada in the first joint educational program of its kind between China and a foreign country. To build up a great career upon this rare privilege, I am now applying for advanced studies in your quality program, hoping that I can someday become one of Chinas top accounting experts.（原文初看不是很差，但语言晦涩干巴，经不起推敲。改后稿行文简洁流畅，第一段开门见山，把该作者最精