2006年高考英语满分作文及名师评析（高考英语作文）.docVIP

2006年高考英语满分作文及名师评析（高考英语作文） 2006高考英语满分作文 　　【全国卷I】 　　【试题回放】 　　假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务 　　注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请apply , application ，志愿者volunteer 　　Dear Sir / Madam: 　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. 　　Yours faithfully, 　　Li Hua 　　[名师点评] 　　这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以我为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。 　　[全国卷II] 　　【试题回放】 　　假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。 　　注意： 　　1、字数100左右 　　2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯 　　3、开头语已为你写好 　　Dear Bob, 　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. its open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m. 　　There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days. 　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and Ill show you around. 　　Yours sincerely, 　　Li hua 　　[名师点评] 　　本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢? 　　【安徽卷】 　　【试题回放】 　　假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国