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E09 垂悬修饰语：分词 郭政达 David?好好写作 讲解版 课程导读 “垂悬修饰语”是指修饰语在句中找不到逻辑上被修饰的对象，它一般出现在句首，用作状语，这也是中国学生在英文写作中常犯的一种语法错误。垂悬修饰语通常有以下三种类型：垂悬分词、垂悬动名词和垂悬不定式。修改垂悬修饰语的方法主要是修改垂悬修饰语部分或修改主句部分，使主句的主语与垂悬修饰语的逻辑主语保持一致。本集课程重点对垂悬分词及其修改方法进行详细讲解。 原文 ▍Authors CommentAs you know from your study of English, participles are verb forms that act as adjectives. In regular verbs, the present participle ends in -ing (a pleasing child) and the past participle in -ed (a pleased child).Like any adjective, a participle needs to be closely linked to the noun or pronoun it modifies. When it is not, it is said to dangle. The dangling participle is one of the most common mistakes in the writing of native speakers of English, so we should not be surprised that it is frequently found in Chinglish as well. ▍Dangling Participles错误示例：① 例1：A: Using either military or peaceful means, most of the remaining enemy forces were put out of action.译文：我们通过军事或和平手段使大部分敌军丧失战斗力。B: Using either military or peaceful means, we put most of the remaining enemy forces out of action.② 例2：A: Conveniently situated, tra?c from Jin Hui Tower to Beijing International Airport takes only 1/2 hour via the Third Ring Road.译文：金辉塔地理位置方便，去北京国际机场走三环仅需半小时。B: The Jin Hui Tower is conveniently situated, only 1/2 hour from Beijing International Airport via the Third Ring Road.正确示例：③ 例3：A: Looking back over the past seventy years, the Chinese people are more convinced than ever that their choice of socialism as their goal has been correct.?译文：回顾过去70年，中国人民比以往任何时候都更加坚信坚持走社会主义道路是正确的。④ 例4：B: Performed by the China Youth Art Theater, the play describes the different lifestyles, feelings, and concepts of two brothers, one a brick layer and the other a painter.?译文：中国青年艺术剧院表演的这部剧描写了两个人不同的生活方式、情感和价值观：一个是搬砖工人，另一个是画家。（选自《中式英语之鉴》pp. 285-286） ▍Sample TopicDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? All universities students should take basic science courses regardless of their fields of study. ▍Sample Essay?Version 1STEM, which st