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3月16日作业2 Manual jobs are being done by sophisticated machines. Do the positive effects outweigh the negative effects? 观点类 开头段（30词左右）： The increasing number of machine has replaced labour force,some manual workers are lose their jobs. But in my mind, it has a positive on development. In today’s world, sophisticated machines have taken over some labor work. I believe that this can indeed bring some benefits. (p) 主体段1优点1（60词左右）： Mechanization can improve efficiency and output, which has beneficial effect on countries. People will make more money and the country will boost economic. In that way, people is easy to promote their lifestyle and fitness. ABC分解：Mechanisation is the driver of economic growth for many countries. (中心句，A+C)。Companies which use machines to replace manpower can increase output, and this means that more products can be produced. (B)。These companies can earn more profits and their employees can improve living standards with higher levels of income. (C+拓展）This is particularly important for deprived countries, where working people used to earn a living wage due to low productivity. (特定化) ABC完整：Mechanisation can provide opportunities for economic prosperity for many industries. Companies which use machines to replace manpower can increase output, and this means that more products can be produced. These companies can earn more profits and their employees can improve living standards with higher levels of income. This is particularly important for deprived countries, where working people used to earn a living wage due to low productivity. (p) 主体段2优点2（60词左右）： In addition, using more machine can reduce work time which means that people can spend more time on their family. It also has provided works with opportunities to play game such as basketball. ABC分解：Another benefit is that people can spend more time on leisure activities. Machines enable these people to finish their jobs more efficiently, so they are able to reduce workloads and cut working hours. (p