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雅思写作原创范文 Topic: Some people think that it is the responsibility of government to ensure that people have healthy lifestyle. Others think people should be free to make their lifestyle decisions. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (政府决策类) 写作结构思路： 以下是我构思的每一段的思路（因为当时是写给自己看的，不知道大家看不看的懂），表*的说明是必须要写的部分。 开头段： Introduce the topic *Viewpont1 (Paraphrase) *Viewpoint2 (Paraphrase) 主干部分 (对称结构)： Transitional Sentence *Merit of Viewpint1 (Help young people back to track) *Problem of Viewpoint1 (Hard to execute/cant be forced) Transitional Sentence *Merit of Viewpoint2 (Symbol of Freedom) *Problem of Viewpint2 (Self-control) 结尾： *Indicate both viewpoints have problems *Come to conclude your own opinion (Guide instead of forcing) 范文正文： Some people hold that government should hold the full responsibility to make sure that people lead their lives in a healthy way. Others, however, argue that it is only the people themselves that can decide which lifestyle they pursue. (39 words) On one hand, the proposal that government should ensure people to choose a healthy lifestyle sounds reasonable to a certain extent. In fact, quite a number of people, especially young people, are living in unhealthy lifestyles. For example, a lot of teenagers are staying up late for parties or PC games, which potentially do harm to their physical and mental health. If government do something, for instance, banning all pubs and inter cafes in cities, it is likely that those people will have to discard their obsession and revert to a normal lifestyle. (93 words) Nevertheless, it has to be pointed out that although the practice seems to be sounding, it is unlikely to solve the problem thoroughly. For example, even if all the pubs and inter cafes are officially banned, cha