11月30日雅思写作预测范文及解析.docxVIP

2019 年 11 月 30 日雅思写作专业预测 11 月 30 日写作预测一 Somepeoplebelievethatthebestwaytoprotectenvironmentistoreducetheamountofairtravel.Do youagreeordisagree? 题目大意： ??有些人认为保护环境最好的方法是去减少坐飞机旅行的次数。同意否？ 思路： ??这道题目属于科技和环境话题。这个题目明显带有偏见和有色眼镜来看待飞机和空中飞行。 坐飞机碍着谁了，难道把所有飞机都打下来，环境就能恢复？世界就能太平？这道题目明摆着冲着被打脸的节奏走。飞机旅行作为现代的一种旅行方法已经被广泛接受。而且在效率，安全，方便上都是其他交通工具无法比拟的。当然污染肯定有，问题是能不能好好说话，比如开发使用清洁能源或者环保飞行而不是一棒子打死。 审题，找出敏感词/限定词： Best 敏感 appropriate Protect 限定 conserve 提纲梳理如下: MODEL: Air travel has offered an unparalleled opportunity to world people who are eager to visit brilliant and fantastic scenery everywhere. However, this kind of journey has been questioned and even criticized for squandering fuel resources and producing pollution. This view could not hold water without consideration of its value in travel efficiency and freedom when compared with other travel transportation. While it is undeniable that people are more likely to take train or bus for travelling than aeroplane due to low fuel costs and more transport capacity, there is no substitute for air travelling during long-distance journey especially travelling to mountainous or island destinations where flights might be the only efficient transportation. Even if transferring between different transportation could fulfill this journey, the waste in time and fuel resources may be less worthy and uneasiness in this way might destroy the feeling of journey. There is also the factor of trip fashion that needs to be taken into account. Travelling by air has become more popular and accepted among burgeoning developing countries people who have desire for widening their horizons and communicating with people in different regions. This kind of travelling industry has promoted economy in trip destination and offered job opportunities to local people, which has produced far larger financial rewards than other transportation. Obviously, it is meaningful to optimize airline and devising large-sized aeroplane to save fuel resources rather than to restrict