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文档从互联网中收集，己重新修正排版， 文档从互联网中收集，己重新修正排版，word格式支持编辑，如有帮助欢迎下载支持。 PAGE PAGE #如有帮助欢迎下栽支持 文档从互联网中收集，己重新修正排版， 文档从互联网中收集，己重新修正排版，word格式支持编辑，如有帮助欢迎下载支持。 PAGE PAGE #如有帮助欢迎下栽支持 【关键字】作文、要点、公平、发展、关键、标准、结构、任务、衔接、规范 四、读写任务类——记叙文 r考题研析 【典例】 诺阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150词左右的文章。 A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didn* t offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person. In a series of cases nationwide^ we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transports which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice. People with moral deficiency (who don t give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned? but they don T deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values but not laws. In 【满分作文】 【阅卷老师点评］ The news is about a young 1.层次分明，结 disabled man attacked on a bus 构清晰 for not offering his seat to a 本篇习作按照三 woman with a baby, which leads 段式：概括文章 a debate about who is right and 大意-?谈谈自己 who is wrong. 对这则新闻的看 I am so upset that in our 法及感受f对于 society the woman with a baby 创建和谐社会自 should be so impolite. It was 己的一些建议。 wrong of her to get her justice 按照这一顺序展 with violence^ which will 开叙述，不但做 really do great harm to our 到了要点齐全， society. Today in our society. 而且富有层次 many other people like her 感。 would take it for granted that 2.高级词汇的使 they should be offered a seat 用 on the crowded bus. as the 习作中用到了： 文档从互联网中收集 文档从互联网中收集?己重新修正排版，word格式支持编辑，如有帮助欢迎下载支持。 PAGE PAGE #如有惜助欢迎下栽支持 文档从互联网中收集 文档从互联网中收集?己重新修正排版，word格式支持编辑，如有帮助欢迎下载支持。 PAGE PAGE #如有惜助欢迎下栽支持 morality requires. However, if I were a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability.So there is still a long way togo for us to build up a harmonious society. In my opinion# we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it happening so as to solve such kind of problems