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雅思写作开头模板之大作文首段写法详解 大作文要求字数至少达到250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。接下来请看带来的雅思内容： 作文的首段通常由以下几方面组成： 1 场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon。 2 一些人的观点some people’s opinion，这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。 3 个人观点，这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。 大作文开首方式通常有以下两种情况： 1 题目中包含了背景信息phenomenon，有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达paraphrase，可以做:● 主动语态=被动语态● 主谓宾=主系表● 某些近义词互换Example:At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claimthat college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business thanon traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。 2 题目中包含了背景信息，有时出现一些人的观点，但题目中字数较少，若直接重新表达，字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下推荐把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息的开首方式来保证字数。总之，合理的开头段可以包括背景介绍、点明话题、阐明观点，2-3句话，40-60字，5分钟内完成。 雅思写作高级短语之13个表示建议的句型 1. My suggestions is as follows 2. The following suggestions should be taken into consideration when we are seeking solutions to the problem. 3. In view of the above, I think some urgent measures need to be taken to solve this problem. 4. According to the above analyses, I would recommend that some urgent steps should be taken to put an end to the serious problem. 5. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 6. One way out is … 7. It will be advantageous / helpful/ profitable/ beneficial if 8. It is wise for … to do sth. 9. A second/ another solution/ suggestion is that 10. Another way of solving this problem is to 11. is one of the be