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精品 Word 可修改 欢迎下载 精品 Word 可修改 欢迎下载 精品 Word 可修改 欢迎下载 专题41 书面表达三 黄冈 七、书面表达 62.同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the environmment”、 “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。 要点提示： 1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作； 2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人； 3、爱护环境，从我做起： 写作要求 l、词数90左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2、根据要点提示，适当发挥； 3、短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 参考词汇：Work hard; be friendly to each other, get on well with; protect the environment； be volunteers I’m Proud of My Family My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. 【答案】My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too. My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other. My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food. My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people. What a happy family! I’m proud of my family! 【解析】 这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：I’m Proud of My Family。主要从1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符