雅思作文-17.减少环境污染和房屋问题去避免疾病.docxVIP

#192: 减少环境污染和房屋问题去避免疾病 Some people say that to prevent illnesses and diseases, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 开头段替换词 To prevent illnesses and diseases： eliminate diseases, protect the public from illnesses Governments: authorities, health authorities Focus more on: pay more attention to Reducing environmental pollution:tackling pollution, addressing environmental problems Housing problems: alleviate the shortage of housing, provide comfortable housing 开头段范例 Environmental problems and poor housing have been linked to some medical conditions. I agree that tackling pollution and housing problems can protect the public from some diseases, but some other measures should also be taken. The government is advised to take action to alleviate pollution and the shortage of housing, which can help protect the public from some health problems. I agree with this view, although medical care is also important. (7) 结尾段范例 In conclusion, I agree that mitigating housing and pollution problems can reduce some health problems, while I accept that medical care also plays an important role in preventing medical problems. 点击开始作答观点 主体段一 A 减少污染 和提高房屋质量 B 避免病毒感染 C 减少疾病 解释（ A-B ）：垃圾处理和水资源管理确保水质，避免水疾病蔓延 解释（ A-B ）：房子质量提高，避免传染病 词伙: 范文: 主体段二 A 减少污染 和提高房屋质量 B 让人们生活方式更加健康C 减少疾病 解释（ A-B ）：空气污染的减少让空气更好，人们更加喜欢户外运动 解释（ A-B ）：低密度的住宅区让人们更加愿意出去运动 对比：政府如果只是宣传也没用 词伙: 范文: 主体段三 A 即便减少了污染， 解决住房问题， 如果没有好的医疗服务B 疾病不能预防和治疗C 疾病还是很多 解释（ A-B ）：疫苗种，可以防止一些疾病 解释（ A-B ）：体检和医疗服务，可以避免一些传染病得到控制 词伙: 范文: