托福高分作文评定标准.pdf

最权威的国际教育服务平台 托福高分作文评定标准 1. 统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的 句子都是不可取的 。请看下例： Joe and I decided to take the long trip we ‘d always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise