2021年9月18日雅思写作8分范文经济增长是否会提升公民幸福感 2021范文.docVIP

2021年9月18日写作8分范文 | 经济增长是否会提升公民幸福感 Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一些专家认为，当一个国家已经富裕时，经济财富的任何额外增加都不会使其公民更幸福。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？ ***9月18日的考题是2021年1月18日的旧题重现，属于抽象话题，难度较高。 Brainstorm: I started by brainstorming reasons for each side of the argument, and then researched the argument using articles from The Guardian, The Atlantic and the BBC. I also read articles from psychological websites regarding money and happiness, Harvard Business Review, and government websites. 我先是集思广益，找出争论双方的原因，然后利用《卫报》、《大西洋报》和英国广播公司的文章对争论进行了研究。我还阅读了心理学网站上有关金钱和幸福、哈佛商业评论和政府网站的文章。 ◆Disagree: Examples of Italy and Denmark Rich countries can offer higher pay, better housing etc Rich countries feel safer and more secure People in rich countries can spend more time on their own hobbies and interests More opportunities for those in richer countries ◆反对的原因 意大利和丹麦的例子 富裕国家可以提供更高的工资、更好的住房等 富裕国家让人感到更安全、更受保护 富裕国家的人们可以花更多的时间在自己的爱好和兴趣上 在富裕国家的人有更多机会 ■Agree: Money can’t buy you happiness Income inequality – so growth is not shared evenly Doesn’t increase personal happiness Economic growth makes rich richer, poor poorer Economic growth may be used for things that aren’t important to people ■同意的原因 金钱买不到幸福 收入不平等—因此增长无法平均分配 不会增加个人幸福感 经济增长使富人更富，穷人更穷 经济增长可能用于对人们不重要的事情 After brainstorming I decided I agreed that additional economic growth does not create happier citizens. 在头脑风暴之后，我决定我同意额外的经济增长不会使公民更快乐。 I decided the first paragraph would focus on reasons why growth does make happier people, and chose two reasons to discuss: 我决定（主体）第一段将重点讨论为什么增长会让人更快乐，并选择了两个原因进行讨论： ?Paragraph one: Rich countries can offer higher pay, better housing etc – examples of Italy and Denmark Rich countries feel safer and more secure ?（主体）第一段 富裕国家可以提供更高的工资、更好的住房等—比如意大利和丹麦 富裕国家让人感到更安全、更受保护 In the second paragraph, I discussed my opinion and why more money does not create happier people. Again I decided to foc