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高考读后续写之对话描写 利用对话描写需要注意的3个原则 1.控制对话的比重，对话促进情节的发展，但不能代替故事情节，1到2处即可。即：简短+地道+量少。 2.对话内容应符合人物性格特点。 3.对话内容应紧扣原文主题和中心。不要脱离文章主线，说一些不着边际的话。 二．对话的3种表现形式 1. 对话标签在前 She said,“I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.” 对话标签在后 “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”She said. 对话标签在句子中间 “I would like to go with you,”she said, “but I haven’t finished my homework.” 注意：对话标签在后或者在句子中间时（第2,3种情况），如果主语是名词，则可以倒装。而代词不可以倒装(said she是错误的)。 “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”said Emily/Emily said. “I would like to go with you,”said Emily/ Emily said, “but I haven’t finished my homework.” 让你的对话标签不平庸的小技巧 在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。 = 1 \* GB3 ① “I would love to,” said Emily in a pleasant tone. 愉悦的语气 用...的语气 in a/an+形容词+tone 如： in a pleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad悲伤的 tone 也可以用 in a tone of +名词的搭配 如：in a tone of surprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/command命令/sarcasm讽刺 = 2 \* GB3 ② “I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice. 小声地说道 用...的声音 in a/an+形容词+voice 如： in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice = 3 \* GB3 ③“I...I.. don’t think I’m right for the part,”I replied with embarrassment. “I will never do that again,” I answered firmly坚定地. =Firmly，I answered，“I will never do that again.”可将副词提到句首 用介词短语或者副词来表达情感 介词短语有：in: in surprise/shock/sorrow伤心/horror害怕 with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride /caution/care/patience/certainty坚定 等等 副词有：firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully等等 = 4 \* GB3 ④ = 1 \* GB2 ⑴“Well,”said the farmer, as he rubbed the sweat of the back of his neck. 此处在说的动作后，紧跟了as引导的状语从句，翻译成“一边，一边”。他一边擦脖子后面的汗水一边说“好啊。” = 2 \* GB2 ⑵“I want that one,”the boy said, pointing to the little dog. = Pointing the little dog, the boy said, “I want that one.” 此处在说的动作后，紧跟了doing的非谓语结构，表伴随。 = 3 \* GB2 ⑶The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice, “It’s yours now.” =The farmer picked up the dog and knelt dow