2023中考专项训练书面表达-叙事类课件.pptx

2023中考英语专项训练书面表达之叙事类叙事类如何写开头? 思维点拨话题内容突出特点适用开头时间较近的个人活动直接交代活动背景正面意义的团队活动突出意义和收获时间较长的难忘经历回味往事、成长经历开门见山型设置悬念型以情动人型如何写开头开门见山型时间，Sb. (with sb.) visited / had/paid a visit to 某人／地方.时间，Sb. enjoyed a wonderful trip to + 地方 with sb. 时间，Sb. (with sb.) did sth. to do sth.「目的」 + 地点.EXERCISE Hows it going? Id like to tell you something about my last Saturday.上周六，九年级的学生们走进敬老院开展志愿者服务活动。假如你是李平，你也参加了此次活动，请根据表格内容给你的美国笔友Mike写一封邮件，向他介绍这次活动。Last Saturday，I with my classmates took part in a volunteer activity to help the old people.如何写开头设置悬念型What would you do if sb. did sth? EXERCISE Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.假如你是李华，上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana，请根据表格内容，写一篇短文。What would you do if your parents were not at home？如何写开头(Looking back on the past,) I cant help smiling / feeling warm / moved / happy when I remember that + sb. did sth + 时间/地点.以情动人型Everyone has their own unforgettable memory. To me, it happened (时间状语). I can still remember it clearly. EXERCISE初中的学习和生活中总有很多你的第一次经历，有些让你感动，有些让你尴尬，但都难以忘却。某杂志社以 “My First __________”为题，举办征文活动。请根据提示问题和要求，写一篇英语作文，描述你第一次做某事的经历。Looking back on the past, I cant help feeling moved when I remember that I gave a speech in public for the first time.过渡句以情动人型Here is what I did that day. Now, I would like to / I’m eager to share it with you. 如何写正文? 思维点拨? 句型 + 模板? 动作 + 从句? 时间 + 顺序? 场景 + 万能句（同时发生、先后发生）Key 1. 句型正文句型 ①When sb. was doing sth. , sb. did sth. .【使用说明】两个动作同时发生： was doing是延续动词；did是瞬间动词。E.g. 当我们正在爬山时，突然看到了树上有些猴子。When we were climbing the mountain, we saw some monkeys in the trees .正文句型 ②While sb. was doing sth. , sb. was doing sth..【使用说明】两个动作同时发生：was doing是延续动词。E.g 当一些同学帮助老人打扫房间时，另一些同学就在做饭。While some students were cleaning the rooms, other students were cooking a meal for the old.正文句型 ③not…until….「※ 特别注意：先发生的事情永远写在until的后面。」① 原始写法：not…until… 【使用说明】后发生的事情 (写成否定句) + until + 先发生的事情。E.g. 直到太阳落山，我们才回家。先发生：the sun set. 后发生：we went home.We didn’t go home until the sun set.正文句型 ③not…until….② 强调句写法：It was