读后续写 之 无灵主语.docxVIP

PAGE PAGE 1 读后续写 ——无灵主语的妙用 有灵主语和无灵主语有什么区别呢？ He is always quick-witted. Quick wit never deserts him. He was seized by fear. Fear seized him. Suddenly I have a good idea. A good idea suddenly strikes/hits him.(A good idea suddenly occurs to him.) 无灵主语作用 增加主语多样性，丰富句型，长短间隔。错落有致。 使语言更具生命力,避免文章枯燥乏味，呆板无力的弊病。 减少人称主语的使用，增加语言表达的客观性。 具有简洁凝练、含蓄不露等修辞特点。 无灵主语的分类： 时间地点的常见谓语动词：witness, prove, bring, see, find, provide 等 Dusk found the girl crying in the street. 黄昏时分人们发现这个小女孩在街上哭泣。 Dawn met him well along the way. 在东方欲晓时，他早就走了一大段路。 The night was as melancholic as his mood.夜晚就像他的心情一样忧郁。 The past few years has witnessed a burgeoning economy in China. 在过去的几年里，中国的经济迅速发展。 The town boasts a beautiful lake. 镇上有一个漂亮的湖。 2.心理或生理状态的常见名词：courage, humor, joy, happiness, sorrow, despair, grief, regret, sorrow, luck, mood 等 （情绪描写） 其谓语动词通常是：creep, seize, dawn, strike, catch, grip, envelop, surround, overcome, desert, deprive, fade, pass, tear, worm into,take possession of, take hold of, sweep through, bubble up, prey on, give way to 等词 All my courage deserted me.我惊讶地说不出话来。 But when my teacher presented me with a canary, my cup of happiness overflowed. 但当我的老师给我金丝雀时，我的快乐都溢出来了。 Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。 Despair enveloped/seized Steve and Zach.绝望笼罩着史蒂夫和扎克。 Grief almost overwhelmed me when I realized this.当我意识到这一点时，我感到极度的悲伤。 A blaze of anger flashed across his face. 他面露怒色。 The anger faded from Hagrid’s face.海格脸上的怒气消了。 Anger and bitterness had preyed on me continually for weeks.几个星期以来，愤怒和痛苦一直折磨着我。 Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.（foul stench 臭气熏天） A burst of fury made his cheeks burn.愤怒让他脸颊通红。 Hysteria bubbled up somewhere at the back of my throat.喉头某处冒出了歇斯底里的气息。 Fear gradually creeps upon her. 恐惧笼罩了她。 A flood of fear welled up in him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 Suddenly my ecstasy gave place to terror; for my foot struck against a rock and the next instant there was a rush of water over my head. 但是紧接着，我的喜悦就变成了恐惧。我的脚撞到了一块岩石，随后，一股水流又涌上了我的头顶。 I remained still