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How to beautify your writing?Please use some adjectives to describe this picture.Free talk第二节 书面表达（满分25分）（2023南昌市一模试卷）英文报China Daily正以Helping the old adapt to a digital society为题征集稿件，请认真观察图片后写一篇短文进行投稿，内容包括： 1.简要描述图片； 2.你的观点和建议。注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目已为你写好。 参考词汇：scan QR codes 扫描二维码Have you noticed that there is a group left behind by this trend?25How many points can this essay get?Please appreciate the writing and mark the highlights in this way.sentence patternsphrases(words / non-finite verbs)spelling / grammar mistakesHow to beautify your writing?Way 1: Advanced words or expressionsWay 2: Various sentence patternsWay 3: Proper linking words narrRememberAlways keep a neat and beautiful answer sheet!ChinglishDo they make sense?1.heart flower angry open2. One car come one car go, two cars pengpeng, people died.3.If you want money, I have none; if you want life, I have one! 1: Employ advanced words or expressionsadvanced simple very difficultdidn’t dothink believeimportanteasilyextremely challengingfailed to dohold the view that…be convinced that / ofof great significancewithout any difficultysimple phrasesadvanced phrasesa growing/an increasing number of peoplemore and more peoplemost of the studentsthe majority of the studentsthink sth. importantattach importance toWay 2: Various sentence patterns 原句：我怀着最深切的感激之情，给你写这封信。(with)With deepest gratitude, I am writing you this letter.①Emphatic Sentence It is with deepest gratitude that I am writing you this letter.②Noun ClauseI am writing to tell you I greatly appreciate_________________________ （你为我所做的一切）what you have done for me.③Exclamatory Sentence I am writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate what you have done for me.Way 3: Use proper linking words admittedly， thus， then， such as， nowadays， as a result ① ,many young parents are addicted to their electric devices like smartphones or computers, paying less or no attention to their kids.② how does it come about? ③ , the smartphone indeed dramatically changes our