2023年中考英语书面表达专题训练：意见和建议.pdfVIP

2023 届中考英语书面表达专题训练：意见和建议（含范文） 1．眼睛是心灵的窗户，保护视力对青少年来说尤为重要。请以“How to Protect Our Eyes”为 题写一篇英语短文，号召大家爱眼、护眼。 写作要点： 1.保护视力的重要性。如：好的视力可以使生活更加便利…… 2.保护视力的方法。如：早睡早起，睡眠充足，多吃水果蔬菜…… 3.保护视力的建议。如：少用手机，坚持每天做眼保健操…… 写作要求： 1. 70 词数不少于 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 How to Protect Our Eyes As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. ___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ 【答案】 How to Protect Our Eyes As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. They are very important to us. Good eyesight can make life easier. But do you know how to protect your eyes? First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. In addition, you should eat more fruits and vegetables. Second, you should use cell phone less and do eye exercises every day. Third, you should take part in some after-school activities to exercise. Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above. [ ] 【详解】总体分析 ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ① “ ” 时态：时态为 一般现在时 ； ① 提示：根据所给信息提示，写一篇作文号召大家爱眼、护眼。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护视力的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述保护视力的方法和建议。 [亮点词汇] 试卷第1 页，共12 页 ①be important to 对……重要 ①in addition 此外 ①take part 参加 [高分句型] First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. and （ 连接两个并列结构） 2 “ ” “Say NO to ． 民以食为天 ，饮食的安全和健康受到越