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雅思考试写作长句的运用技巧(2篇) 雅思考试写作长句的运用技巧1 一：避免空洞的单词和词组 1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息，完全可以删掉。 比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion. 这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为： Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents. 2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换。 例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time. “due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式： Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now. 二：避免重复 1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。 例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size. large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为： The farm my grandfather grew up on was large. 更简洁的表达方式为： My grandfather grew up on a large farm. 2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换。 例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm. 这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁： My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm. 雅思考试写作长句的运用技巧2 Part 1 Opinion Essay 观察观点类题目的特征，我们不难发现，此类题型的`特征是题目有且只有一个观点。而题目要求我们回答的是“同意”或“不同意”的观点。所以只要确定好自己的观点，开头段就可以写出来。 例如： Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree? 如果，我们选择同意此观点，可以根据“背景句+直接转述题目+个人观点”的公式。 These days, it is quite mon to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. (直接转述题目) Personally, I agree with this idea. (个人观点) 如果选择不同意题目观点，则可以用“although”的让步状语从句进行改写，得到： These days, it is quite mon to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large ci