2020-2021中考英语作文热点话题写作解析4青少年近视(2页) .pdf

2020-2021 中考英语作文热点话题写作解析 4 青少年近视 书面表达（15 分） 据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题。为引起 广大青少年的重视，某英语报刊正在开展以”Saving Eyesight”为题的征文活 动。请根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视 力的可行建议。 要求： · 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 · 所有提示须全部用上，并做适当发挥。 · 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名 · 80 词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving Our Eyesight As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul （心灵 ）. However , 70%of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem? _____________________________________________________________________________ __ 作文分析 1.试题解读 ：该篇是一封投稿作文的形式 ，由你来分析造成青少年近视的原因并 提出保护视力的可行建议，文章需要同学们发散思维 ，需要一定的常识积累。 2.写作要点：（文章分为3 段 ）每段内容严格按照素材的三个要点来写。第一段 写造成青少年近视的主要原因。第二段提出保护视力的可行建议。第三段进行总 1 结。 Saving Our Eyesight As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul （心灵）. However , 70%of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem? The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. For example, many of us read in wrong positions such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book. Besides, spending too much time on screen and taking less exercise also cause poor eyesight. Now something must be done to protect our eyes. First, sit straight while reading. Second, don ’t forget to rest during the working time. It’s also helpful to relax our eyes by seeing some green trees or doing eye exercises. Last but not least, eat some food that is good for our eyes like carrots or fish. In a word , let’s take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future. (共计 128 词) 2