高中英语课件：专题06续写典例AMemorableSpanking.pptx

专题06新高考英语读后续写典例分析06新高考英语AMemorableSpanking

目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析

01表达积累

表达积累1.体罚2.我的兄弟姐妹3.办些差事4.倒在地上，又踢又叫5.停止大喊大叫 physicalpunishmentmysiblingsrunafewerrands(差事)droptothefloor,kickingandscreamingstopyelling

表达积累6.她的眼睛眯了起来7.我含泪恳求8.留下了更持久的记忆9.上大学10.接送某人 HereyesnarrowedItearfullypleadedleftamorelastingmemoryattendedcollegepickupsb.

表达积累11.无论怎样恳求或责骂12.发脾气13.买些圣诞用品14.我深情地看着母亲15.她的手紧握着我的手。 Noamountofpleadingorscoldingthrowatantrum.purchasesomeChristmasitemslooklovinglyupatmymotherHerhandtightenedonmine.

表达积累16.买单17.扑灭了我们内心的火焰18.她僵硬的脸19.不愿意做短暂的滞留20.嘲讽的话语 paythebillputoffourinnerfameherstifffacereluctanttomakeabriefretentionscornfulwords

02原文分析

AMemorableSpankingMymotherwasasupporterofphysicalpunishment,butforallhertalkingshehasneverspanked(打屁股)mysiblingsandmeonlyonce.Insteadshefoundwaysofpunishmentthatleftamorelastingmemorythangivingusaspanking.OneofthemostmemorableoftheseoccasionsoccurredwhenIwasfour.原文分析故事开端：引出话题（难忘的体罚）

Intheearly70’smymotherattendedcollegeduringthedayandIwasindaycare.OnedayatdaycareIwatchedanextremelytiredmotherattempttopickupherdaughter.Thelittlegirlasked,“Momma,arewegoingtoMcDonald’sfordinner?”Themotherreplied,“Honey,nottonight.Mommahastorunafewerrands(差事)andthenwehavetogohomeandcookdinnerforDaddy.”“ButIwannago.”“Susie,Isaidnottonight.Maybe,ifyouareagoodgirl,wecangotomorrow.”Susieimmediatelydroppedtothefloor,kickingandscreaming,“IwanttogotoMcDonald’s.”原文分析我在托儿所看到的一幕：女孩为了去麦当劳，撒娇撒泼…

Noamountofpleading(恳求)orscolding,hermothertriedstoppedSusie’stantrum(发脾气).Finallyhermothergavein,“Okay,Susie,let’sgotoMcDonald’s.”Susiestoppedyellingandsmiling.Shegrabbedhermother’shandandtheyleft.TosayIwasamazedwouldbeinaccurate;IwasdelightedthatanythingIwantedcouldbehadbythrowingatantrum.原