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应用文提升（八）

作文题目：

假定你是李华，你刚参加完本市组织的一场国际马拉松比赛，赛后应邀给组委会写一封邮件反馈自己比赛的感受并提出一些个人建议。

内容包括：

此次比赛办得好的方面；

此次比赛待改进的方面以及你的相应建议。

好句：

[Racingtrack+Citytransportation]

Withmanyhistoricalsitesandmodernbuildingsincluded,theracingtrackisareasonableone,alongwhichnotonlycanIenjoythefascinatingandbreath-takingcityscenery,butalsogetmoreknowledgeaboutthedevelopmentandprosperityofourcity.

Sothoughtfulandcaringwasthecommitteethattheyarrangedareasonableracingtrack,alongwhichredflagsandsignsweresetevery500meters,enablingcompetitorstoknowhowlongtheyhadrunandgotencouraged.

Itwasthereasonableracingtrackwithcharmingcityscenerythatmadethemarathonparticularlyimpressive.

Haditnotbeenforthereasonableracingtrack,Iwouldn’thavehatdhechancetoexploremycityandseesomuchwonderfulscenery,whichwasignoredandunnoticedinmybusydailylife.

However,someparticipantswerenotsatisfiedwiththeracingtracking,explainingthattheinconvenienceitcausedwasoutofproportiontothebenefitsitbroughtbecausetheyhadtomaketurnsfrequently.

Thereasonableracingtrackallowsparticipantstoenjoythebeautifulscenerywhileskippingbusymainroadssoastoavoidmessingupthecitytransportation.

[Audience]

Difficultasrunningamarathonis,IfinallymanagedtoachievethegoalIsetwiththeencouragementoftheenthusiasticaudience.

Nothingwascomparabletothecheersoftheenthusiasticaudience,whichfilledmewithconfidenceandencouragedmetorunfearlessly.

Theaudiencebeingtooenthusiastic,withsomebreakingtherulesandcrossingtheline,thesituationbecameabitindisorder.

[Supply]

Giventhatthemarathonisalongdistancerunning,adequatesupplysuchassaltywaterisamust,

withwhichparticipantscangetsufficientenergytomoveon.

Thismarathonwillbebetterwithadequatesupplyonaccountofalargenumberofparticipantsandlong