初中九年级英语TaskTheartformIlikebest（市一等奖）.pptx

Task:TheartformIlikebestStep1:Makeaplan体裁：A.记叙文B.说明文C.议论文D.应用文人称：A.第一人称B.第二人称C.第三人称时态：A.一般现在时B.一般过去时C.一般将来时Step2:MakeanoutlineTip：磨刀不误砍柴工！Part1:Introduction:OutlinePart2:Mainbody:Part3:Conclusion:AsforEnglishcomposition,whatonearthshouldwetakeintoconsideration?Handwriting(书写)：BAAttention:Yourhandwritingisthefirstimpression(印象)toteachers.Structure(结构)：重开头，巧连接，多展开，会总结“凤头猪肚豹尾”六字法文论家也多用来评论写作。这是一种对诗文创作的开头、主体以及结尾的比喻说法。起头要奇句夺目，引人入胜，如同凤头一样俊美精采;文章的主体要言之有物，紧凑而有气势，如同猪肚一样充实丰满;文章的结尾要转出别意，宕（dàng）开警策，如同豹尾一样雄劲潇洒。凤头猪肚豹尾Rhythm(节奏)：长短句结合Wordcount(字数)：about90words---notlessthan90words---morethan90words.Standard(评分标准)：Standard(评分标准)：Language(语言)Attention！1Sentencetype（句子类型）2Sentencestructure（句子结构）Commonmistakes(常见错误)Singular/pluralform（单复数）3Chinglish（中式英语）4Tensesandvoices（时态和语态）5Sentencestructure(句子结构)1.他步行上学要多长时间？Howlongdoesitspendhimtowalktoschool?takeSentencetype(句子类型)2.他们是读书俱乐部的成员吗？TheyaremembersoftheReadingClub.?AretheyChinglish(中式英语)3.她非常喜欢听音乐，因为音乐总能使她感觉很棒。Sheverylikeslisteningtomusic,becauseitcanalwaysmakeherfeelgreat.verymuch,Singular/pluralform(单复数)Tip:Makeasfewmistakesasyoucan.Checkingcarefullyisanimportantstep.4.这些苹果又大又红。Theseapplearebigandred.sTensesandvoices(时态语态)5.他们正在为野餐做准备。Theygetreadyforthepicnic.aregettingLanguage(语言)happy--excitedknow--realize,beawareofneed--requirehard--challengingshould--besupposedtobut--however,last,--lastbutnotleastIthink--Inmyopinion,....Frommypointofview,....Tip：晚词优先，词组优先1.多样表达（Vividexpression）2.合理连接（Properconnection）①and,but,or,so,however(Meanwhile,Besides,)②firstly,secondly,thirdly/finally/lastbutnotleast③分词（participle）过去分词（表被动）现在分词（表主动）他是王小毛，17岁，在暑假中想参加课程。--HeisWangXiaomao.Heis17.Hewantstoattendcoursesinthesummerholiday.--HeisWangXiaomao,a17-year-oldboy,hopingtoattendcoursesduringthesommer