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2024届高三英语读后续写提升材料

Describeactionsindetail具体的动作描写(一)

 Usespecificverbs使用精准化动词

1)(可根据场景采用不同的表示“说”的动词)

1.“...nowIknowthatyouonlycametospyonme...”heshouted.

2.“Pleaseexcuseme,”hecalmlyexplained,“I...”

3.“Ifeelsickwithallthisfatandheavyfood,”shecomplained.

4.“Neversaynever”heencouragedme,tellingmenottogiveup.

(add,warn,scream,whisper,announce,chat,bark,cry,beg...)

2)“看”的表达

1.Tomwasannoyedbuthedidntshout;hejustglaredatmesilently.（怒视，瞪眼）

2.Shegazedathersonworkingpainstakingly,asatisfiedsmileclimbingfromhermouth.

3.Thewomanwasstaringeagerlyatthegirl,tryingtomakeaconversation.

4.Ionlyglancedatyouressay,butitseemstobegood.

(glimpse,spot,notice,witness,fixoneseyeson...)

3)“走”的表达

 动作描写是对人物的动作、行为进行描述来表现人物的性格特征。

1.Asthebellrang,AmyandlrushedoutofDIYclassroom,dashingtothestorewherewehadourmothersgiftpicked.

2.Theboygotup,mumbledsorry,andfledthecornerasquicklyaspossible.

3.Whilewaiting,shenervouslypacedupanddownoutsidetheroom.（踱步）

4.Iwaiteduntilitwasdark.Silentlyandsecretly,Islippedintotheyardoftheoldlady.Ilookedaround...

(jump,drag,storm,charge...)

Describeactionsindetail具体的动作描写(二)

 Showemotionbyaction通过动作表现情绪

 focusonface,bodyandvoice聚焦面部、身体和声音

1.Mybelovedmom,wearingashiningsmileonherscarletface,added.“Thenarrator’spartisimportant,too.”(脸部)

2.Sohappywasthelittlegirlthatshealmostjumpedup,withtearsfillinghiseyes.(眼睛)

3.Maccollapsedontheseat,feelinganenormousweightshiftedfromhisshoulder.(身体)

4.Tomparkeddownthestreet,rushedtoBobbysfrontdoor,tremblingwithexcitement.(身体)

5.Unabletocontain/controlhisdisbeliefandanger,heturnedaround,roaringinanger,“Whoonearthdidit?”(声音)

Describeactionsindetail具体的动作描写(三)

 Useconsecutiveaction使用动作链

细化动作，把动作分解成一连串细微的动作，写出动作的过程，形成动作链，这样人物更有画面感，立体感。

1.Hearingthescreams