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读后续写专项突破

读确定主角01明确问题/矛盾02解决问题/矛盾035W+1H主旨（who、when、where、what、why）（How）续如何讲好一个故事？情节读后续写

描述之前或现在的世界，并涉及主要人物和人物关系主要角色遇到了一些事情（导火索），冲突矛盾出现角色直面恐惧，解决问题，过程可能有些不顺利角色最终克服障碍，回到第一幕的状态或实现了想要的状态，并有所成长和进步（升华）好故事源于好结构（续写部分）冲突/矛盾反应（情感、动作）尝试自身努力或借助外界工具危机缓解或失败告终转折灵机一动关键人/物的帮助解决！矛盾------解决

一、高级句式1.定语从句（限制性、非限、后定）2.非谓语（doing、done、todo）3.被动(bedoneby)4.with的复合结构5.强调句（itis/was...that...）6.倒装7.修辞手法(比喻belike、拟人、排比)

二、语言描写1、环境描写2、情感描写3、动作描写

1.环境描写①Thesunshone.Themorningsunshoneonthegroundwarmlyandgently.Thewarmmorningsunlightfellonthegroundmildly.形容词+意象+动词+副词/方位介短②外面刮起了风，地上的灰尘(dust)乱飞(disorder)。Outside,therewasastrongwind,thedustonthegroundflyingindisorder.外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。Outside,therewasastrongwind,______________(blow)thebranchesinalldirections.Thedustonthegroundwasflyingindisorder,_________madepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.whichblowing

即学即练1.昨天下了倾盆大雨。2.西湖的美景是一场视觉盛宴，两岸bank布满绿树红花。（with复合结构）（概述）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdaywhenschoolwasover.Iwas__________whenIgothome.ThepeacefullandscapeoftheWestlakeisatruefeastfortheeyes，withitsbothbanksdottedwithgreentreesandcolorfulflowersallwet

2.情感描写①Iwalkedawaysadly.Iwalkedawaywithtearsinmyeyes.Iwalkedawaywithsadnessfillingmyheart.离开的时候，悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落。Whenwalkingaway,disappointmentandsadnesscameinwavesandtearsstreameddownmycheeks.IburstintotearsEverythingintheworldlostitscolor.Nightwasdeepandtherewasnothingbutdeadsilence.②她回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。Tiredandhungry,hewenthome,not______________(say)aword.adj1andadj2,主句，doing…/独立主格结构saying

③听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来。____________(hear)thisgoodnews,hejumpedforjoy,_______hiseyessparklinglikeshiningstars.Hearingwith

即学即练2.一瞬间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动的说不出话。1.Mary很害怕。_______frightenedwasMarythatshecouldntsayawordormove,____________(sit)onthegroundlikeastatue.SosittingInaflash,_______